Beta request

[laurab1.livejournal.com]

My muse decided to give me everything, all in one go XD

So, I have Sherlock/John alien abduction kink roleplay NC-17 aka 18 porn. It includes medfet, BDSM and D/s. All safe, sane, loving and consensual, too. I feel like I'm pretty much there, but as it's not exactly what I usually write, and I'd hate to look foolish, please could someone beta it for me, before I release it outside of the kinkmeme?

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[laurab1.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Will send it to you later this evening, UK time :)