Request for a Beta

[aurora-boreali.livejournal.com]

Sherlock communities,

I am in the market for a strong Beta.

I've written 10K for piece I've titled Holiday Cheer. It's a Johnlock melodrama, angst-a-plenty, about Harry visiting the boys over the holidays. I've written the important bits, including the ending, but I'm having trouble bringing it home--it lacks a solid middle section describing holiday festivities, Harry being a terrible house guest, and moderately explicit J/Sh sex. No need for Britpicking--I don't bother. I'm looking for an opinionated person who can help me move the story along (not my strong suite) and is willing to roll with my run-on sentence style.

Thanks. AB

Comments

[red-chapel.livejournal.com]

I'd be happy to help. I've done beta'ing for about 2 years now. I've got opinions. I can also edit (part of my real life job).